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Offline lostprophetpunkTopic starter

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Critique Needed
« on: October 28, 2009, 07:22:57 AM »
I would like to know what you think of this new design.

The design has yet to be coded...

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Hope you like it.
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Offline nadeemshafi9

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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #1 on: October 28, 2009, 07:24:39 AM »
its nice, i cant see anything wrong with it yet
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #2 on: October 28, 2009, 07:26:25 AM »
Except maybe the massive twitter logo. Any reason you want to advertise another company so prominently for free?
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #3 on: October 28, 2009, 07:28:38 AM »
lol i dont use twitter yet
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2009, 07:29:19 AM »
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2009, 07:44:18 AM »
Quote from: thorpe on October 28, 2009, 07:26:25 AM
Except maybe the massive twitter logo. Any reason you want to advertise another company so prominently for free?
I was thinking over that part when I finished it, it's mainly because I am not sure what else I can use to fill the gap between the nav and the bottom of the header.

@nadeemshafi9. Thanks so much for the feedback.
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #6 on: October 29, 2009, 11:53:20 AM »
pretty sweet design, although i have to agree whats up with the massive twitter logo?

But how about if you minimize the the nav block? as in make it smaller, because the first thing that grabs my attention is the massive twitter part. Instead try to focus on the latest work?

just a suggestion
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #7 on: October 29, 2009, 11:54:15 AM »
Quote from: svgmx5 on October 29, 2009, 11:53:20 AM
pretty sweet design, although i have to agree whats up with the massive twitter logo?

But how about if you minimize the the nav block? as in make it smaller, because the first thing that grabs my attention is the massive twitter part. Instead try to focus on the latest work?

just a suggestion

i wish i could see things like that
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« Reply #8 on: October 29, 2009, 12:08:01 PM »
lol, well the design is good as it is right now, but i mean that twitter logo makes me want to click on it and learn more of what he is doing other than looking at his work
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #9 on: November 05, 2009, 09:54:19 PM »
Quote from: thorpe on October 28, 2009, 07:26:25 AM
Except maybe the massive twitter logo. Any reason you want to advertise another company so prominently for free?

Exactly what it is! I was listening to a lot of different podcasts. One about internet marketing. These guys love it when you put their logo for free on your site. Becuase it shoots their rankings threw the roof, and they make huge $$ and get huge VC loan$.
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Re: Critique Needed
« Reply #10 on: November 10, 2009, 11:43:46 PM »
I have a few opinions:

   
  • I do not like the border on the three featured images.
  • I feel the dates are too close to the side bar.
  • I would not publicly list an email address on a site instead have a contact Me link to your email form or will be asking for a ton of spam mail.
  • The My Inspiration text seems it might be more appealing if it is centered
  • I would add just a tint of the purple color to your heading tags.
  • I would also indent the paragraphs.
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