Topic: Would like your critique of my site

[oceanlugano]

www.Dumbagent.com

Any first thoughts, advice and/or constructive criticism would be great.

I've been keeping this site as a blog and having fun with it for about two years now. I'd now like to try to do more with it (monetize it, launch an E-book, etc.) but first I thought I'd check if I should change or improve it in any way. I hope I'm posting this correctly.



Thanks!


-O

[sKunKbad]

My first impression is that your particular Wordpress theme makes your site cluttered. There's too much to look at, and the spacing around the elements that make up the page is too tight. You might take a look at the way other popular blogs are styling their content. Good examples would be http://net.tutsplus.com/ or http://www.smashingmagazine.com/. They have a much cleaner and more inviting look.