Topic: New Professional Wrestling Promotion

[CoolAsCarlito]

kansasoutlawwrestling.com

Thank you to anyone who checks it out@!

[CoolAsCarlito]

And when I say check it out I mean check it out to critique it!

[Niku01]

It looks nice, but is not finished.

[TheFilmGod]

a quick zap with seo xray and I see that you have no meta description no heading tags and have poor semantics code. For example why are you using span tags within an ordered list. Use <li>!

It looks great... but that's not because of you. It's thanks to the desinger who put together the pictures for you.

[CoolAsCarlito]

It is finished. Is it possible for anyone to go through and say what they think of the overall look of each of the following pages and include maybe one or two things I could do differently on css?

Index Page: kansasoutlawwrestling.com
Roster Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=roster
Bio Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/bio.php?username=rebel
Champions Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=champions
Title History Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=titlehistory
Event Archives Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=archives
Gallery Page: http://kansasoutlawwrestling.com/gallery/main.php

Some of the other pages just have a little text with queries attached to the page so nothing to critique on those. Thank you.

It looks nice, but is not finished.

[thewooleymammoth]

you have alot of css embedded in your page. also drop downs are possible with just css. I recommend that.

also in your link you dont have the actual text. Put in the text to the link and use text-indent: -999px;

[CoolAsCarlito]

also in your link you dont have the actual text. Put in the text to the link and use text-indent: -999px;

Huh? What link? What text? I have lots of links and text on my pages.

[thewooleymammoth]

your nav links tags are just <a href=''></a> they should be <a href='' style='text-indent:-999px'>Home</a>

[marklarah]

I thought it looked bare until the images kicked in

then I was like

whoah.

Look good for what it is man, job well done imo.

[arbitter]

A little bit heavy (the images and stuff) to load. People with low internetspead might not hang on as long to see the whole page.

Also I find it frustrating you can't click 'social' and 'media' and stuff right away, but that you have to click on an item of the drop-down menu. Also it's annoying that the most bottom cell from a dropdown also has a white-dotted line on the bottom, right above the red. Try to fix that.


But oh boy I could learn a lot about all the css you use :p

[CoolAsCarlito]

But oh boy I could learn a lot about all the css you use :p

I'm obsessed with css and love firebug. Makes things so much easier for me.

[thewooleymammoth]

you need to center the background image. it stays on the left while the content sits in the middle, looks screwed up on wider monitors

[xcandiottix]

Best page I've seen on here today ... from an art stand point. Your main pages drop down menus are gross though. They look like tables that spawned out of nowhere. The lower Outlaw logo is squished... I think you used the upper one and just resized with html but it isn't proportional. Some links are broken...... otherwise.. cool site.

[CoolAsCarlito]

I transfered all my pages and info over to wordpress and wanted a few people to take another look at it.

kansasoutlawwrestling.com

[mailbagmedia]

the skull image on the left looks like a place holder.  it doesn't look right, like it is strech out to make it a separator for the Top 5 links.
Maybe choose a different background color besides black.  it makes the site gloomy.